Lord Anzius

THX. I'll have to work on my grammar, but I really did press the spell check button. I also used word to spell check it. I dunno what happened there ...

Thanks for the replies :)

THX. I'll Edit it still a bit but I can acctually explain the end of the prolouge. I want to tell the history of Jack and in the end There ...

The Poem was a one that makes one think, to look at world in another way, it was dramatic, and i think it desserves a star, it is one of ...

GOOD POEM. It is very dramatic and it makes you really think. I think it desserves a gold star